Adil Hussain Lashari Travelogue too short

Still too short. revised is 475 words. u were asked  it should be 1000 words.

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Adil Hussain Lashari

Role no:10

BSIII 2K18

Travelogue writing

Travelling is very important for healthy and wealthy life. Because when we travel at any specific place we learn new things and meet with new people get fresh mind after traveling. But mostly masses travel for a purpose, someone for their business, someone for their company meetings and someone for knowing new things.

Now I am going to discuss my traveling which I did at Hyderabad for sindh university test, my uncle was going to Karachi with his family, I was also with them, we enjoyed a lot together in train because train box is like a small room, where we watched a movie in laptop spent our time in pleasure mood.

While spending our time, train reached at Hyderabad, I got off from the train and offered fajr salat then I sat on the rickshaw and went towards to my friends hostel. My friend abid picked up me and we did breakfast together then went to hostel and met with rest of my friends.

After that we were ready for going university for test, when I reached at Sindh university, it was astonished moments for me having seen huge crowd of candidates at a biggest university of sindh.

After attempting the test, we went to sindh museum and saw ancient culture of Indus civilization, portray of Allan faqeer, ancient things of ‘Moen jo Daro’  after that we went to Hyderabad for presence in the threshold of (MOLA ALI a.s  kadam gah).

Al-Manzar where Indus River is situated, I had heard huge compliments of this place, I was very intrested to visit it once, eventually I went there could get very specific information and (Al-Manzar) view of this beautiful place was irrefutable. (PALA) fish is very famous of this place, we didnot miss this chance and have fabulous taste of (PALA) fish.

It has said that, Travelogue is very important part of Life. When we prevail to move other Places, some how we get new things, so similarly all the above mentioned places taught me a lot and gave me awareness to observe the objects deeply. by this short period of clock. I could get some fresh thing and fruitful time with allies.

These all things were informative and interesting for me, because I have never visited such kind of amazing places before. Through the pretext of entry test of sindh university, I got a chance to travel a beautiful city of sindh (Hyderabad) and it’s beautiful places with having comfort full souls.

This was my first experience of Traveling which I could write down and presented my thoughts and exposure of Travelogue.

Now I  Wanna end up my session, what ever the things I wanted to share through my writing , I did but now I have not swarm words to describe the travelogue writing.

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340 words, while 1000 plus words required , too short

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Adil Hussain Lashari

Role no:10

BSIII 2K18

Travelogue writing

Travelling is very important for healthy and wealthy life. Because when we travel at any specific place we learn new things and meet with new people get fresh mind after traveling. But mostly masses travel for a purpose, someone for their business, someone for their company meetings and someone for knowing new things.

Now I am going to discuss my traveling which I did at Hyderabad for sindh university test, my uncle was going to Karachi with his family, I was also with them, we enjoyed a lot together in train because train box is like a small room, where we watched a movie in laptop spent our time in pleasure mood.

While spending our time, train reached at Hyderabad, I got off from the train and offered fajr salat then I sat on the rickshaw and went towards to my friends hostel. My friend abid picked up me and we did breakfast together then went to hostel and met with rest of my friends.

After that we were ready for going university for test, when I reached at Sindh university, it was astonished moments for me having seen huge crowd of candidates at a biggest university of sindh.

After attempting the test, we went to sindh museum and saw ancient culture of Indus civilization, portray of Allan faqeer, ancient things of ‘Moen jo Daro’  after that we went to Hyderabad for presence in the threshold of (MOLA ALI a.s  kadam gah).

These all things were informative and interesting for me, because I have never visited such kind of amazing places before. Through the pretext of entry test of sindh university, I got a chance to travel a beautiful city of sindh (Hyderabad) and it’s beautiful places with having comfort full souls.

This was my first experience of Traveling which I presented through my words.

In the last but not least, I will suggest to everyone to have traveling new places for learning and knowing new things so that you could get fresh your mind.

 Practical work carried under supervision of Sir Sohail Sangi 

Media & Communication Studies, University of Sindh