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Talha M Sarwar Travelogue

  When u people send write up with out proper file name, or subject line, this happens. can u check what is ur file name? This is causing problem for me as well as ur self. Writing on eight year old travel can e memoir, not travelogue. U might have traveled after 2012. Some current, recent. U were asked preferably travel some place now with a intention that u have to write travelogue. Karachi is proper noun, first character should be with cap Evening etc are not proper noun Travelogue   Talha M Sarwar   Class : B.S Part 3     Roll no : 2k18/MC/152  My first visit of Jinnah airport, Karachi.   My first visit of Jinnah Airport, karachi   I was 14 years old, when I visited Jinnah airport first time . It was the arrival of my grandfather form Hajj. I was so exited about this journey, because I had never seen airport before in my life. I always asked to my parents that how an aero plane looked like,while flying and landing, and it was t...

Usama bin Zain Travelogue

This can be an article. Even not feature.  start with para No 3, make it para No 1. Pls see lecture points, what a travelogue is.  This is not Fort. rather a residence of some Sardar. Fort is always for war and defense purpose.  There can be feature on it.  Mind proper noun be with cap, some o are marked. There are many grammatical, language mistakes. U should have revised it before sending 1020 words Travelogue By Usama bin Zain BS part – 3 (2K18/MC/160) Assigned by Sir Sohail Sangi Subject : Newspaper & magazine Production Department of Media and communication studies (UOS)   Karam khan kot (fort) Karampur (2017)   One of the most authentic and well architect work of history can easily get the attention of any sensible person. Because historical things have their own class especially in sights like their way of construction with cleanliness and classical designs on walls which are very long in height and width too. [[ Its best ex...

Atoofa Siddiqui Travelogue

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  Revised - travelogue means out of city visit Atoofa Siddiqui 2k18/MC/36     BS Part 3-Semester 6 Revised Travelogue- English Sir Sohail Sangi Travelogue- Visit to Meeran Ja Quba   While living in Hyderabad since start, I have spent all my childhood and adulthood here. Yet, I was unaware of its historical sites, let alone history. The mystery of Pacco Qilo (Pakka Qila) and Kaccho Qilo (Kacha Qila) made me search on internet about it. And the results left me excited and curious to visit the last Muslim holders of these two royal fortresses buried in “Meeran Ja Quba”, located in Hirabad Hyderabad. History reveals that Mirs were the last rulers of Sindh before British rule and buried in a great number together at a place. Actually the area named as Hirabad (Diamond Town) because its inhabitants were mainly bankers and jewelers of ancient time. That is why the Talpurs selected it as a favorable place to build their mausoleums over here when the...

Yahya Ali Travelogue

 Should have mentioned where this beach is situated? Proper fotos, also showing ur presence on the site  Proper paragraphs  Yahya Ali Class : Bs part-III (2k17-2k18)   Roll no :160 Assignment : Assigned by Sir Sohail Sangi                                      A trip to Al Hesi Beach the red sea Some people were born to swim under water and I’m not one of them. In the month of August 2020. the month that I was born in, I had a trip of my life that actually felt like that I was reborn again. I woke up early in the morning like any other day and I had my breakfast with family while having my breakfast my phone rang, I picked it up and it was my brother telling me to go with him to the mall for shopping, I didn’t know for what purpose we are going so he told me that he with his friends arranged a...

Jawed Panhwar Travelogue

 Will be checked  file name not proper  No fotos. fotos, particularly one showing ur presence there گورک جبل جو سير Jawed Panhwar 2K18/MC/72 سير سفر ڪرڻ سان نه صرف تفريح ٿيندي آهي پر ان سان گڏوگڏ انسان کي جسماني ۽ ذهني طور تي به فائدو پهچندو آهي، پوء اهي جڳهيون چاهي جبلن جون اوچيون آسمان کي ڇهندڙ چوٽيون هجن، تاريخ سان سرشار ماڳ هجن يا ڪنهن ڳوٺ جي تازي ۽ صاف سٿري هوا ۾ ساه کڻندڙ هجو. سياحت هر ملڪ ۽ قوم لاء هڪ اهم ڪردار ادا ڪري ٿي جنهن جي ڪري نوان ڪم ۽ ڪم ڪرڻ جا ذريعا وڌن   ٿا ۽ انهن جي نون پراجيڪٽن جي ڪري روزگار جا موقعا پڻ وڌن ٿا ۽ ملڪ جي معشيت کي پڻ ترقي ملي ٿي. سنڌ ۽ بلوچستان جي وچ ۾ هڪ پهاڙن جي قطار آهي جنهن جو نالو کيرٿر جبل آهي ۽ ان پٽئ جو گذر دادو ضلعي کان ٿئي ٿو. کيرٿر جبل جي اتر ۾ سڀ کان اوچي چوٽي گورک جبل آهي اها چوٽي سمنڊ جي مٿاڇري کان 5 هزار 600 فوٽ مٿي آهي. اهي ڊسمبر جا ڏينهن   هئا سيميسٽر جون موڪلون هئڻ ڪري مان پنهنجي ڳوٺ دادو ترسيل هئس ڪجه ئي ڏينهن گذريا ته ڪلاس جي دوستن گورک جبل گهمڻ جو په ڪيو ۽ ايئن ئي اوچتو ئي اوچتو گورک گهمڻ جو منصوبو...

Hassan Sohail Travelogue

   To be checked.  pls ensure, it should not plagiarized  -  File name is wrong as "Document" is no file name   No fotos -   photo showing ur presence there?  Is your medium in other assignments English? Choose one medium in assignment Hassan Sohail 2K18/MC/61                                                             A Day To Remember   6am, lights were dim, Azaan was going on with the message of 'leave the bed and come to success'. Ruefully, few people heard it. Meanwhile, I was struggling to overcome the sleep's web. Minutes of struggling pay the price and I was able to stand up properly without any external help. I took a shu...

Faieez Sohail Travelogue

  To be checked -  Writer’s name and roll etc missing in text file Do not insert fotos in text file -  No foto showing ur presence there Pls ensure it is not plagiarized ROAD TRIP TO MURREE   It was a usual November night for me on 6th March, 2020 when I was spending some quality time at a gathering of my neighborhood friends when around 01:00 AM my phone rang, I looked and it was another close friend of mine, Muneeb who was calling from Karachi. I picked up and he asked me if I was up for a trip to Lahore which I refused because I didn ’ t want to go to Lahore alone to which he then revealed that the plan is actually to go to Naran, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa. I just had to hear that and I immediately said yes enthusiastically because I had been dying to visit the Northern areas of Pakistan for quite a while but Muneeb told me that we were supposed to leave early in the morning on 8th March. Understandable, I had very less time for packing, getting some unfinish...

Talha Asghar Travelogue

 1000 words To be checked. No foto showing ur presence Talha Asghar 2K18/MC/153  Assigned By Sir Sohail Sangi                                Travelogue               A Sudden Trip To Northern Areas In the middle of the summer, when i was on the verge of loosing my temper as always because of the hot and moist weather, one of my friends hit me up asking if I wanted to go on a trip to northern areas, I jumped out of excitement and replied to him with “of course yes scene on boys”. Then i asked him where were we heading to and he told me about the trip plan. We were going to Kaghan and Narran. The trip was of 4 days starting from one Saturday, I was extremely happy as summers had me exhausted and lazy. I just had one day t...